Then what? I won't kill you, if you kill off a character, it's for developement of the story...By the way, I wonder what happens to blair! Can't wait, I multitask too because I get ideas that won't fit!! @_@
'Nyways good luck, if Death Child gets published, I'm sure as hell buying it! It's a good piece of work, and Anika was my favorite...
Good luck to you!
ImmortalIncarnate

Fix chocked, isn't it choked?
^_^ YAY MORE!
ImmortalIncarnate

this is sounding horrible, but amazing! Now there are three people/ children who lost someone and Blair is going to be pissed and will fight her fricken heart out to get him back. I love this, I don't care that someone dies, I mean if you don't tell me that things are going to happen i'll be even more surprised lol. maybe i shouldn't read the comments unless they are extremely important. lol I can't wait until the next chapter!

*Sigh* I can't believe I'm bothering to read your sequel. I'm still mad at you for killing off Anika. Anyways though, so far the living void is really good.But you do have quite a few spelling errors , if you want me to point them out i will :-)

"God, Ion, why do you have a dick up your ass?" Everyone asked as they wandered around Ion in incessant circles. "You're such a whiny little brat!" They said, laughing and skipping.
"A WHAT!?" Ion yelled, trying to catch one of his attackers in the face. "You guys are douchebags! You're all mean, go rot in hell!"
"Aw, come on, Ion," Blair said, patting Ion on the head, "You can't be a stick in the shit all the time, buck up!" SHe then scurried away.
"Hey Ion, did you get a haircut?" Erik asked, looking at him through curious eyes, filled with questions, wonder, and amusement.
"Did I what?" Ion asked.
"Oh, nothing..." Erik said, backing awy and laughing his ass off.
"Um, okay..." Ion said, finding a random book and reading it, because it appeared out of thin air and like, formed itself in his hands, so he read it because its there, and you might as well read something if it's in your hands, right? So yeah, he read it.

Damn I wish you lived in Antioch, CA. Then I could talk to you, get to know you, and then say, be a nice person in general. Anyways, good job, I enjoy the story. Blair acts a lot like me, wtf...
I cannot w8 for the next chapter!

Ahh! The sweet taste of diet 7up and shaking while reading an internet book. YESH!

Oh yay! Sequels! (Why'd ya kill off Anika?! I liked her...>>)
G2SUA!

"um liek, nuw addventiores, lolz" De pepel named bliar sed.

Da pepl wit bloind hare swinged da feets over a cowch b4 falling of de edge. da peple crying, brown ey turned into Eric after. "so quein was el bloinde pepl que estabas hablando yesteryear? El que estaba gogisousama,"

Eric go jump, talkarth in the question. His hair was made with red. He was lost?

Uno was un nino de blone. The otro was omocharoi, como hair wa shoort desu, and clean desu. Da ladder was looking leik older maybe he was 1900, maybe 20. He strong desu, and his shirt was ripped, so he was all sexah. He was wierd, cuz he liek woar bandaids on his neck.

"O, you are cum at good teim." Eric sed in happy. He sent a wave that crahsing in2 dem and bring dem ovur. "like, highth guys, arriving! Joshy! Blar!" He moved on top of the pepl. "Dis iz Kandy, and el es-" He punched Blar aweigh. "Is ION, who iz in luveth with Juudaime."

"So, how did you two meet?" a little girl asked Blair and Ion a few years later, when all wasn't as fucked up as it had been. A tiny tot sat beside her; he garbled his agreement and added lots of drool to the mix.

Ion coughed. "Erm...Blair, why don't you tell it?"

Blair looked up from where she was reading a magazine, looking utterly bored. "No." She turned away and back to her magazine, flipping a page to continue reading an article on spontaneous combustion.

"NghanhBOO!" spit up the little tot, waving chubby arms at Blair, as if accusing her of being lazy, which was what she was being anyways. She threw him a glance, then went back to reading, stretching her legs out over the other end of the couch more, sock-clad feet dangling uncaringly over the arm.

Ion sighed heavily, hanging his head. "All right...I'll tell it.” He paused, collecting his thoughts, even though he knew what he wanted to say and how to say it. “Well...it all started when I realized that she never took things seriously..." His eyes darkened as he glowered at Blair from the corner of his eye. "...and then she cut my hair."

Blair snorted, not even looking up from her page. "I told you that I won’t apologize for that. Why should you complain? Shut up and deal with it already." She flipped the page to read and article about the fattest man alive.

“Why should I deal with it?” demanded Ion. “You cut my HAIR, when I wasn’t LOOKING. I just turned my back - just once! ONCE! And you cut it all off! My long, beautiful, blonde hair!”

“If you love it so much, marry it!” said the woman with a roll of her eyes.

“I tried, but it didn’t accept. It just stared at me.”

“Hm, Ion, I wonder why…”

“And you still cut it all off when I’m not looking!” added Ion vehemently.

Blair looked at the little girl and the gurgling, drooling toddler. “You’d think he’d learn not to turn his back, right?”

-

Great chapter, as always. I expanded on the cutting of the hair story we came up with...or mused about.

AH! The window is doing the same thing it was doing before!

Thanks for the somewhat-well wishes; it means a lot. I'll have the next chapter of Videoman out within the week, I hope. If Grans actually allows me to put it up.

This review isn't as long as Tama's, but, I like it. Blair is fun to write. I might write some fanfiction when Death Child goes up on (f a n f i c t i o n . n e t) one day.

This just brightened my sick day. Seriously.

I love Blair and Joshua's attitude toward everything - sarcastic humor knows no bounds with these two! And the 'total epic fail' comment about Anika's...well...epic fail...was funny. I still like them teasing Erik about being a pedophile.

Just watch. Pedobear will make an appearance.

Onto more serious subjects (VINCENT AS DAD! ZOMG! 'KENA MADE A FUNNY!), I noticed only TWO spelling mistakes within this chapter, which is a big improvement in my book. I noticed one typo, but that doesn't count as a SPELLING mistake. And you spelling brunette as 'brunete,' for some reason, makes my brain spin. I've seen 'brunnete' and 'brunette' in various novels, but not 'brunete.' Maybe I'm wrong.

I love how Vincent can't get his brain around the fact that two perfectly normal teenagers would commit suicide because they're bored.

Hee; "Leave this idiot alone – he’s my idiot -- he doesn’t understand when teens are teasing.”

That is seriously my favorite quote so far. Yes, Erik is Vincent's idiot. Woah, something's happening to my window. It's going up and down, up and down, when I hit the spacebar, so I can't see what I'm typing - well, I see it, after I stop and scroll down, but that's annoying. I have to rely on typing skills, not my eyes. That's my cue to leave.

Signed,

Melissa Felton

PS: Keep writing. Or else...I'LL COUGH ON YOU!

wow. eager to die are they? it'll be interesting. what happens i mean. Ion can tell his story and how hes been in the Void. it'll be interesting also to know what the two kids roles are in this one. I know the evil dude that Anika was supposed to kill is doing all that stuff. i just know it! i can't wait.

the way you had the note written, dude that freaked me out. I mean i got shivers and was looking around me making sure nothing like that was real. the feeling of being watched. weird.

WOO!
You=bad influence to many children across the globe!
You endorse the act of killing one's self!
Yes!