|Reviews for Can you keep a secret?|
| FlirtyBirdie 12/27/09 . chapter 3
make out buddy- good times!
| FlirtyBirdie 12/27/09 . chapter 2
the text convo isnt lame its realistic. :D
i love the milk pouring btw!
| FlirtyBirdie 12/27/09 . chapter 1
lol. i love tyhe oh crap ending!
| Chloeee 8/26/09 . chapter 3
Very good xD I loved how Olivia is always pissed off coz of Trent hahaha xD Update soon!
| CherryTwister 8/14/09 . chapter 3
I just read your story and it's great! Please update soon! I want more :)
| WinMyHeart5444 8/14/09 . chapter 3
Hahahahahahahaha abstinence pledge? I totally would have died!
I love Trent and Olivia's relationship, it is so adorable. John is a a-hole though, Sasha should take a rock and pound him in the head with hit.
Awh, she likes him. :) I love this chapter and I cannot wait for the next one! I have a suggestion for the next chapter, if you want to hear it. I'll PM you and let you know.
I love this so much, I cannot wait to read more!
| WinMyHeart5444 8/14/09 . chapter 2
*"Trent Howards. The Trent Howards. He was to be my partner for the whole summer. Anyone have a bottle of cyanide? Maybe a gun?
Olivia thought as she watched the said football player walk towards her." Make this one sentence.
Haha I love the part where she asks for tweedle dee. That made me laugh :)
No way! I'd never have the guts to dump milk on someone :) I like Trent so far, he seems really cool. Olivia too. :P
| WinMyHeart5444 8/14/09 . chapter 1
Hello! I'll review as I read :)
*These 2 sentences "It was different from what she expected. What she honestly expected was a filthy run down dump with cockroaches and rats swarming around everywhere." Replace the period with a comma, it will eliminate the choppiness :) Also, instead of using expected twice, I'd substitute with another word like "It was different than she had first thought, what she had expected, honestly, was a filthy run down dump with cockroaches and rats swarming everywhere."
Haha, story of my life. I'd be absolutely lost without my iPod and my books. Oh, how I would tire of the world without them :)
I would like to bunk with boys. I think it would be fun ;)
I love the ending sentence! Cliff hanger! Also, I am a huge fan of short chapters. They make the time go by faster, although I can never seem to write any... Oh well :(
*Suggestion: I'd just go back and reread. Just put in comas and such in places. I love it so far!
| i love life 2/4/09 . chapter 3
update soon pls
| StrandedOnYou 1/29/09 . chapter 3
u actually updated :)
and i have had a make out buddy before
anway i liked this chapter and i agree she should atleast have a lil fun D
HURRY UP AND FLIPPIN UPDATE
| calmthestorm 1/21/09 . chapter 3
Another great chapter!
Loved it, please update asap!
| calmthestorm 1/21/09 . chapter 2
LOVE IT !
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I CANT WAIT !
| SecretFeelings 12/18/08 . chapter 2
um okay, a few things to say. It's rushed, the characters are stupid and way to fake. You dont give them a real personality, just throw out, she's shy even though we really know nothing about her yet. a few other things too but I'm tired and i want to go to bed
| Roselyn Flores 12/16/08 . chapter 2
This is really good, and I like it alot. There were a few spelling errors but that's okay. I hope you updaye this story soon!
| xspringdaizyx 12/14/08 . chapter 2
GOOD! Keep writing I check everyday to see if you've written anything everyday i get dissappointed. Keep up the good work. I love it!