Great story wtrite more soon!

I really like your story so far! I'm very, very curious about what is gonna happen! Hopefully you'll update soon!
Grtz Silencia

YAY LOVED IT!

Oh, I don't think it was a boring chapter. maybe a bit more dialogue at the dinner table and some flirting or interaction or something between April and the Ackermans would have been nice. Don't try to skip over events that could give us insight on the characters, you know? But I really like this, so update soon!

Hi there!
I really like this story and can't wait for more!
I think your a very talented author.
One thing for improvment is proof reading there were multiple mistakes in this and most of the other chapters.
But still your doing a great job keep it up!

Wow, a huge plot twist!! Who could that person be on the couch? The older brother? Update soon!
-Kia

cool story!! update soon please

Now I'm hooked. Wat did it say? Update Soon!
-Kia

not bad... quite interesting actually.. didnt expect their reactions to be like that.. i'd be waiting for the next chapters then.. :)

Squeal.
I LOVED it.
More.
More.
More.
MORE!
NOW.
stupid cliff hangers -.-'

great chapter!

ooh, evil cliffhanger. Can't wait to meet the bloke. should be interesting. Update soon!

I thought she didn't know the driver's name? Other then that it was really good. Can't wait to meet the fiancee! Update soon!
-Kia

hm...interestante, no? Yes, I think I'm going to like this. Update soon!

This has potential. I look forward to reading more. =]