I cant wait to read more! Update soon please!

poor James :(

Their normal because of a fruit bowl. Funny.

I like this story so far. But it needs more description: What do the character look like? What does the scenery look like? How are they acting/ behaving. The dialogue is good, but you details after them.

It's a good story and I like the idea.

Fantastic! I cant wait to read more!

lol 'I'm the dog stupid." somehow i don't think a werewolf and a normal house dog would look the same :P

and i should get a fruit bowl too, cuz apparently I'm not normal...

excellent work!

freakin hilarious! keep up the good work!

Ah this was really cute. I liked the little arguments Vlad and Dane have. It makes them more endearing and adds to their quirky charm. The "silver" line was hilarious.

Also, I have no idea why this stood out to me, but it did. I LOVED the use of the word "riot" to describe her hair! Maybe that's because I adore that word and am currently infatuated with Paramore and Three Days Grace, but I digress.

Can she read minds, or did Dane really say that out loud? It was unclear.

This needs work, but the concept is good and has lots of potential.

Try making the chapters a little longer.

Hm... longer chapters, maybe? And a bit more detail. Right now the reader should be getting to know the characters a little bit more. Don't get me wrong, I love how you jump right into the action.

"Damn Incubus." though, good line. :D

Fun story so far - but longer chapters (or more posted on an update) would be great...

There is lots of promise for a story like this.

"So – I’ll…I’ll…I’ll sunburn rather badly” That was hilarious!

Has potential...look forward to seeing how it progresses