You really know how to put emotion into your poems. Like usual i enjoy your poems. You have so many i like. That's why your my favorite poet.

Dont worry. I'll keep messaging when i think about it/everytime im on the comp. LOL

I've never dated, so i cant say i understand how you feel, but i can understand how frustrating it is to not forget what you want to forget. I may not have dated, but there is a person i like and i always wonder why the hell do i like them?

This is really good! good luck too :D


XKristie MarieX

i adore your repetition. AND YOU! =]

yay! You are writing again! This is exciting!
I liked the structure of this one, and the rhymes (whether they were intentional or not). Is the guy here the usual subject? I thought that was over :(
Haha but yeah hormones suck.

Oh my god, this is beautiful and amazing and ... yeah I think that's about the only words that could sum it up.

-stix-

This was really nicely written! I really loved how you made the words rhyme, and how you wrote the message! The way you made the last part, with the conclusion, how you thought it wasn't true you could keep control, was a nice way of ending it. You're always so good with rhyming! Keep at it!
The Reverse Edge Blade