Sorry again, i forgot to comment on your poem, without you. It was written really well i actually started crying.

This poem is good to. I dont know who decided to close the cemetary at 4:30 and i agree: it's stupid

I like how without the a/n it could be about anything. The whole racing the sun idea is really great and interesting. I like the piece a lot. I think it's the best piece by you that I've read so far.

im going to have to agree.

to start, great poem. Just beautiful.
But this better not be true. Cuz that is so... (many curses later) STUPID! Why doesn't the world work the way it is supposed to?!

This wasn't one of your best. I think I liked the ending in your last poem better, for it tied it up a little more. Your rhyming was really good, and it had a nice feeling. But I think the ending could've been better
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