I swear it's great. I am looking for more.

I really, really like this. You set the scene exceedingly well. If you'd like me to beta this as well, I'd be happy to do so :D This sounds like it will be a good story.

Woo hoo for stories based on role plays XD

I liked your summary, seems like a good idea for a story.

I can't wait for the actual plot to pick up

Anyways, this was good. Good description and everything, probably could've used a bit more, or maybe have it be a bit more fluid, but it was still good. :]