|Reviews for Copyrighted Powers Academy|
| Sarthim 1/31/09 . chapter 4
I bet that the tension between Vanessa and her brother will spike in later chapters. This almost looks like it's heading into the psychological thriller area. Very cool. Keep it up.
| Sarthim 1/31/09 . chapter 3
Hm...the rules for the place seem to be pretty strict. Good decision, it will give the next chapter a sense of urgency. No real complaints here.
| Bleeding Liar 1/31/09 . chapter 6
ooh love it can't wait for next chapter
| Starrgal18 1/31/09 . chapter 6
You're right it is a little boring. But, o there was a new character. I still wondering what the other two can do and I'm wondering about Willie. Please Update.
| lael1bologna 1/31/09 . chapter 1
I don't exactly get the meaning, but I am sure that when I read more, it will make sense. (I just get confused on most prologues...) Happy Writings!
| Sarthim 1/30/09 . chapter 2
I liked the introduction at the very first chapter. It's not often where we see a story where we know exactly what will happen in the end. That almost gives the story a sort of thriller/mystery appraoch and if pulled off well, suspense can be filtered from that aspect superbly.
So far, good description and a sense of unavoidable doom is felt. I hope to also see the characters develop even further in later chapters, which I'm sure will come.
Very good job so far. A very unique approach.
| Luna Turner 1/29/09 . chapter 1
Well I do have one thing to say. This prologue captivated my interest entirely.
And you thought I had talent!
Your imagery was amazing. I could picture every moment. It was like watching a movie.
I can't read the rest now, but I'll be sure to as soon as I can!
p.s. I found no typos or errors. Kudos!
| World Theorist 1/29/09 . chapter 1
Surprising Prologue. At first it seemed like this was going to a story of children attending a school of great expectations, and then at the last line-a twist. It captures your interest and hits you with a bang. 5/5 for the prologue.
| Christy Leigh Stewart 1/28/09 . chapter 5
This was exciting! And I still like Vanessa lol Good to hear they don't die...yet...
| Christy Leigh Stewart 1/28/09 . chapter 4
I don't think your story is cliche, you shouldn't worry about that!
Vanessa is very cute, I like her
| Christy Leigh Stewart 1/28/09 . chapter 3
Short chapter but it was fun. Also, it's explained a lot more to me.
| Christy Leigh Stewart 1/28/09 . chapter 2
This isn't the type of story I tend to read but I'm enjoying this. And you seem to really care for your characters, so that's sweet.
| Christy Leigh Stewart 1/28/09 . chapter 1
I love the name of the story, it's rather funny. Everyone is going to die, though? I'm already sad...
| Harlee Rae 1/27/09 . chapter 2
HOLY CRUD! I am so glad you said to read this! It's great!
| Celestial Songbird 1/25/09 . chapter 5
Whoa..*blinks* That was exciting. First I was like "Tristan! No!" Then I was all hopeful because the headmistress lets him live. Next "Acid Leeches! Oh snap!" Now the cat-and-mouse deal really comes into play rather than just being alluded to, and it's fantastic. The headmistress is deliciously wicked. Please update soon!Celestial Songbird