Kind of depressing at the end, but I think that's part of it. Very well done, the time references really do well with emphasizing living in the now is just the best for now. Well done!

I liked the contrast in this. The way the narrator is pleading, but denied, creates a strong emotion at the end.

I also like the repeated reference to time. It tied this together nicely.

[your arms, The feeling] I think that should be a semicolon

My only concrit would be that the commas got a little excessive and gave this a choppy feeling. I'd suggest trying to smooth that out a bit.

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