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Lexy-Kun 2009-06-24 . chapter 1
Very interesting, I particularly loved Liadan's accent and the way you subtly adapted some of the insults to make it sounds closer to Liadan's and Glikkael's races. Your choice of name is perfect as well, and I like the idea of leprechauns having a bottomless bottle of booze.
Your ending's very good as well, figuring out a way to get them together in the end must have been pretty hard, but you did a perfect job of it.
Thanks for this one-shot, loved it.
frogs of war 2009-03-29 . chapter 1
I'm glad that Glikkael's personality didn't change. He's still prickly and harsh because he's a golbin. Liadan conjured up images the character from the cereal commercials, so I saw the kids in the woods standing next to a foul mouthed leprechaun.
Curb Crasher 2009-01-08 . chapter 1
I wonder what kind of dysfunctional relationship these two will have. XD Goblins and leperchauns--surprising, but effective!
MacKitty 2008-12-20 . chapter 1
...that is the foulest mouth i've ever heard on a leperchaun.

i loved this story. :D
chanilow 2008-12-09 . chapter 1
Loved IT!

Mum wanted to know why I was laughing, and she made me read the entire thing aloud :)
Twin Eclipse 2008-12-08 . chapter 1
oh gosh, that was... hahaha, i loved it, very well done, i love how shy the leprechaun gets after the oil thing, that scene was adorable and ... hahah, well, you know
glass castle 2008-11-27 . chapter 1
Good story, though it reminded me some of Shrek. That is, if Shrek was R rated for language and Shrek and Donkey became romantically involved. That's my one suggestion, that if this story is intended for teen readers (and it seems to be), the language is a little profane. But it is an interesting pairing of fantastical characters, and the writing is very fluid and easy to read. Well done.
Undecidedly Insane 2008-11-27 . chapter 1
This was amazing and so funny. Liadan is a great character and I love the title and how it fits in with the story. Great job.
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