Hm. I love all of your stuff, but this one amuses me more than usual, for some reason. I love Kir's 'fuck off' attitude, and you're just killing me with curiosity about what he is. Anderson's antagonism towards the Animal Control is kinda irritating, but he seems to be improving. :) And I love the kitsune and dragon. But why do they stay in Kir's truck instead of go inside with him to work or stay at home?

Ah I love this story. Are all non-humans immortal, or just some? Kir and Anderson were so awkward at the end. Cute.

I love this story! It gets better with every word ~ will be waiting for updates ^^

Kir is hilarious. He doesn't know know how to keep his mouth shut, and he doesn't even want to. The detective is cool too, but it seems that he's got a long way to go before he can match insults with Kir. I can't wait for your next update.

I was ~wondering~ why the detective seemed so suspicious.

Yay for plot development!

If you're wondering about my lack of differences in writing reviews, blame it on life. It's destroying my creativity.

So, this is good and interesting! Thank you for writing this.

Fenrir! And the serpent! I finally got that you were thinking about Norse mythology.

Also, Kir seems like a cool character. Not someone I'd want to work with, but nice to read and watch. Like House. I love House. ^_^

This is really interesting. I mean, Animal Control Officer! I found that hilarious.

are you going to finish this?

... Well I can't say I'm not interested. I do have a question. Midgar serpent... FF7? Or did you not get it from there? Because if the Detective finds mostly FF7 pictures I'll laugh... HARD.

More soon, I hope. As always I love your stuff.

_RIOT_ Fenrir

*snigger*

So, is he gonna get together with Detective Pretty, then?

Though, I so think, sequel for the cowardly warlock. Give him his very own pookie. Maybe he'll get more self-confident and less scaredy-cay.

This story is really cool so far. I love the different kinds of creatures you keep showing. It makes me wonder what your going to reveal later on down the road.

Wow! This is great and interesting! I like Kir and his furry/scaley companions... interested in learning more about what Kir is/can do... can't wait for the next chapter!