i love this story! it better not be over! you have to continue, please? it made me cry and i rally enjoyed reading what's up so far. i can't wait until you up date or start story numer two.

Oh, wow, that was such a beautiful stroy! I loved it. You did in an incredible job! Don't ever quit writing.

Great slash. My favorite couple was Tel and Talmon, and it was sad that Talmon died, but you still made it work.

Verica and Tintagel are a great couple. It turned me off at first because of the father/son thing, but it got better.

excelent work!! i have to vote Tintagel and Verica as the best couple in this story. you're very talented, so please write more!

This is a pretty interesting story. Tel and Talmon are pretty sweet together. :) Tel belongs to the moon god with that silver hair of his. lol. The moon god has some plans from them all. Tel might have his prayers answered after all.