Short, but interesting and nicely written!

wow. you're really really good at this. i know it seems overly truthful to you, but this is amazing. "a thousand and four post it notes" was clever. and this is a prime example of the poetry in prose you posess. loved it.

It's frighteningly good also. Your characterization of Rachel was great. I really enjoyed this! Is this a story that you'll be updating regularly?