I loved this story! It was a great read and I'm not very happy it's over...At least Trent came back :) Suspense, complicated personalities, original idea, romance and the view on ghosts/all the details concerning ghosts - I loved it all. Thank you for sharing.

Oh man! This has to be one of my all time favourite stories! I wish you had written a little conclusion though on Trent and Gregory. I LOVE those two characters! And they go so well together. Omg...I seriously love this story, I can't say it enough. I'm sad that it's over.

You're an amazing writer and I just love how creative this is.

Wow! It's getting even more interesting now! I love the suspense in this story.

I like both Greg and Trent more and more. The small moments when they kiss or just talk normally are cute xD

And poor Trent, to die the way he died...

I cry through the last few chapters. Then Trent comes back. Then, I cry harder. Thanks so much for this emotional torture. Really, I mean it. Even if I'm being sarcastic.

I like the story so far, it's pretty interesting and the idea is very original. I can't wait to read more. It has the atmosphere and

there is a mystery! I like that not everything is obvious. I also like your characters. Trent and Greg both have very interesting and

complicated personalities and I think you managed to show it quite well so far. Great job!

Brillaint. Absolutely brillaint.

OMG! I can't believe it ended :(

Such an amazing story...surely you'll do a cutsey one-shot where Trent and Greg...reaquaint themselves? It's driving me insane that you left the ending kinda on a cliffie!

Still great, tho. Will deffo read the rest of your stuff when it isnt 11:53 PM!

:)

I really enjoyed this fic. I was almost in tears in places. beautiful.

Thank you for the up! D -

Oh my gosh, this is so brilliant! You had me absolutely terrified for a moment that there really was no hope for a happy ending!

Seriously though, this is a great bit of fiction. Your plot is captivating, your writing style amazing and you characters absolutely heart breaking. I love the fact that you've let the implications of what's going to happen build up and the subtle hints in every chapter. All of your characters were convincing and captivating from the way you wrote Trent's instability to the sincerity of feeling that seems to come from Nathan. I fully intend on reading more of your writing, good work.

Thank you for completing the story. I really enjoyed how it started so mysteriously and how aggressively Trent protected his space. Then I enjoyed the mystery of trying to exorcise him and learn who killed him. It was kept me interested throughout and it's great that I got to find out how it ends. Kind of. I think the ending was just right and I can use my imagination from there.

Wonderful,amazing story! I'm in love with it. I was in need of reading a good story and I'm so glad I found yours. The plot is great, the characters awesome and the love story so heartbreaking and sweet. I was waiting all the epilogue for Trent to appear and I was almost losing hope... I'm so glad that he is back even if we didn't get to know what happened to him. I have decided to think that they are going to be happy and together even if they are going to have to solve all those emotional problems that they both have. Thanks for writing this story, you should have much more readers and reviews that you have.

i loved this story.

it was an absolutely spanktastic read

specially the ending ! well written :D

Aw. I really liked it. It was happy without being mushy or fluffy. And I've loved this story since I started reading and I'm so happy I stuck with it. You are a great author and I'm gonna go check out more of your stories ]

Ah man, this story is so fantastic. I first found it on aff AGES ago, and though I kept checking back for updates, it seemed abandoned. Then I did some investigating a few days ago and found that you've been posting it here! Never was there a reader more happy than I!

I devoured the story, the last few chapters left me heartbroken but hopeful - I was like "surely she's not going to just leave it like that... but what if she does? But no, Greg's going to get his happy ending, won't he... *sob weep sob*?"

VERY thankful that Greg did in fact get his happy ending, although you kept me in suspense for long enough, you evil thing!

Loved the characters and the character development - I enjoyed learning more about the characters and their pasts through their actions, reactions and interactions rather that just being told straight out by the narrator or in dialogue as less experienced authors are prone to do.

You have a fantastic plot which did not seem at all forced, especially in the way world concepts were introduced to the reader - often amateur authors try to describe their new world to the reader and point out similarities and differences and how it runs, but you allowed readers to immerse ourselves in this world and find out for ourselves in what ways did it differ from our own world.

Very well done, definately a favourite and something I'd recc to friends! :)

Nicely done. Perfect ending