lol i loved it...nice story line...it is really expanding nicely )

cant wait for more!

Ahh you had to stop the chapter there! I wanted to see Gregs reaction! Thank you for updating :)

Still don't like Trent very much, and I still think Greg's a cutie. I also still like this story, so please please please keep updating, mmk?

Ash

Could it be possible that maybe that Trent's body is currently a host of sorts? That's how it is with Max isn't it...? If I read correctly.

This killer dude sounds like an omega creeper. . I'm reading all this late at night too! XD

GAH I LOVE THIS STORY! w

Such an amazing and original plot line, and so..intense. u

I don't like Trent. [ He creeps me out. D:

I'm dying to know what happens next! (ironic...)

Great chapter! Keep up the amazing work! :D

Great chapter, I loved it (: Trent cracks me up. Haha. Keep it up and update soon!

Faith

O-ho, and the suspense begins! I'm getting excited now! And you updated much quicker this time! Yay! Keep it up, love.

Ash

My guess is that Trent's spirit was expelled from his body and the bad guy is using his still live body. I can't think of any other reason why Trent wouldn't be acting like a normal ghost, so if you have thought of one, then I applaud you for creativity.

There are small spelling mistakes throughout this story so you might want to back through and edit sometime. Otherwise, this is one of the best, most original, and well written stories I've read in a long time. It's very well written with an engaging plot and excellent characters.

Please update soon!

that's cute:

/Notes: Oh, the suspense! Who really killed Trent, and why did it happen? Will Gregory ever realize the meaning of “sexually frustrated”? Stay tuned in for answers to these and everything else! (XD)/

it's like it's some cheesy soap opera!

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omg i loved it lol )

great to see you back writing again...i honestly believe that you are one of the better authors on this site...and i believe that with all of my heart )

if i get time ill go read the story you are co-writing..but idk if ill be able to fit it in...im so backed up right now from everyone having spring break...in a single day i had like 74 emails about new chapters..and this went on for about 4 days...im SOO far behind...lol...but i push the really good stories (aka this one) to the top of the list )

anyway..cant wait for more!

ahh! the suspense is killin' me! I thought you abandoned this story when you didn't update for a long time. Fortunatly you havn't. Keep up with the excellent work and please update soon!

-lpluver

Another wonderful chapter! Keep 'em up!

Ash

Woaah, i loved this chapter, especially the bit when Greg saw 'Payback' written on the mirror, nice touch! Eagerly awaiting your next update. :)

D'aw, poor Greggy-poo! Trent's an ass! How dare he try to do that to Greggy-poo? The ass... Anywho, still love the story, and still wait for MORE!

Ash

WOAH! nice ending...and way to leave it with a cliffhanger...jeez a lot of people are doing that lately and it makes me sad lol...but it helps the story so its all good :)

omg! his ghost thing inside of him didnt do anything! more plot! yay! lol

cant wait for more!