O.K. I have 2 favorites now...

"...Ria, how many of them did you kill?"

"Only five..."

do i really have to say who?

Ria is my favorite already. We show affection in the same way.:D

Wow, you are definitely the master of hilarious-and-astoundingly-unusual stories. I like this one, too. lol So does Sylvia come onboard sooner or later?

well for such a long time for updating was pretty short but still decent keep it up

pretty good please try to finish this one

Wow, I must say dude, that was quite the epic introduction. I really love how Micheal can is so calculated, and his partner is completely nuts. That's gonna make for an interesting story. Can't wait to see what happens next.