That was. Beautiful.

1) "One minute I had been asleep and then the next I was staring at my body from across my bedroom." Woah, that must have been devastating!
2) Um, I love the ending. It's so bittersweet.

Aw, it's cute! I really like it.
Original too... lol
Lee
PS: The brother is SO going to get busted for that...

Cute! And Very cool! Nice job.

I red this story the second it came out. I just didn't get the time to review. I love the grave with a twist of happiness through the story.

Woah.

I loved it.

Just woah. lmao.

You're great.

...You could continue this story. Both of your one-shots would make good stories. I loved this. Eric and Jeremy are so sweet. And I feel honoured to be the one who inspired you to write this as you ARE my FAVORITE author on this site. I've loved everything about ALL of your stories you've written and your story with the really long title (I don't feel like typing it. lol) is actually the FIRST HET story that I've read on here. I WORSHIP you! (bows at your feet as if you were a Goddess)

WHOOT! First reviewer!
*party time*

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I wasn't sure whether I was supossed to "Aw..." at the end or be slightly disturbed.
Which is good.