|Reviews for His Majesty's Kingdom|
| Narq 1/17/09 . chapter 13
Yep, I have enjoyed reading this chapter.
it was an interesting part with Lisa.. i wonder if he imagined everything.. which is unlikely.
| Narq 1/12/09 . chapter 12
Yeah, I enjoyed this chappy! It was totally wonderful! I also noticed your attempts to add more description - good on ya!
| Howling Cat 1/4/09 . chapter 11
Okay, so the last review I left didn't really do your story any justice like..at all.
What I meant to say was probably something like: the depth of this story is amazing, and the way Derek's mind works is intricate and crazy and I love it. I love Robyn too and I want to see more of him...but I want Derek to open up, too! And I don't want his brain to explode :( Haha, I lovelovelove this. (But not Erin. She can go trip on a rock.)
You're doing a great job with this story and it's just like...ahh! Amazing.
| Narq 1/4/09 . chapter 11
Hi, in this chapter, I really liked how you made the characters fight each other. Poor Derek has his own problems and he sure doesn't want to tell his best friend (he's the one with the artery problem, I presume?) and poor Robyn just can't figure out why his friend is being so harsh on him.
All and all, Great chapter!
| 3 1/2/09 . chapter 10
I love that last bit there.
You have a great story, I really like reading it. :)
| Narq 1/2/09 . chapter 10
Nah... VERY nice chapter!
| Howling Cat 1/2/09 . chapter 10
I like this. Really, really like this.
I'm intensely into this.
| Narq 12/28/08 . chapter 9
Don't GET A WRITERS BLOCK! (damn, I forgot to put the aprostaphe in.. wahtever)
Oh, a little advice if you've got trouble getting our character along... (don't tell me i'm crazy 'cause my friends do) TALK TO THEM! They'll answer you! Ask them what they like, their favourite colours ect. Then, when you're done, make your characters talk to each other (OK, I sound totally mad, right) but, yeah, that's what I do... every night too...
| Narq 12/23/08 . chapter 8
Ariel was cute
I think you just need more time to suss out Robyn's character.. don't be too streessed.
| Narq 12/23/08 . chapter 7
eh, just one problem.. is it 401 miles 'away'?
Elsewise, this chapter was pretty well done
| Narq 12/22/08 . chapter 6
Yeah, you did add a lot more description and it helped me read more easily!
Great chapter! I'm starting to like Wolf (somehow)
| Narq 12/22/08 . chapter 5
FANTASTIC ChAPTER! I especially loved the last sentence - it sent shivers down my spine!
| plumblossom 12/22/08 . chapter 6
I can hardly see how Robyn will end up more important in Derek's life than all this.
And didn't Derek's mother hear any of what went on between Derek and Greg?
| Jasion Drake 12/20/08 . chapter 1
I get the impression all this meandering is going somewhere really interesting.
Don't disappoint! *glares*
Also, the girl in the hospital is most depressing and the parental reaction is very believeable writing.
And now I'll be on my merry way.
| Narq 12/20/08 . chapter 4
I haven't taken drugs either so I can't help you with that!
Good chapter though.