well... I don't know how to directly reply to your reply. lol. sorry. so I'll just post another "review".

Ah, you don't have to do that. lol. I have just one story, and it's only one chapter right now. I'm still working on the second chapter, and it's taking a while because I'm on vacation, and because I want to make sure it's really good. It's been pretty much 2 1/2 - 3 weeks since I started the second chapter.
And wow! They call you Amma? Lol. And my friend told me that, since on your profile that you're 'that bitch', she told me, "It's like you two are TWINS!!" lol. Because I'm... pretty much the same. And I'm sometimes a grammar nazi, except for when it comes to something I write. Because I don't know how else to word it.
Well... I've gotten off topic. lol
And actually, the description makes perfect sense, and thank you for explaining it to me. I felt so stupid asking. lol.
And I found your profile by reading your review on the Madness at the Masquerade(sp?). lol. My friend (the one who said you and I are twins, she had told me to read the reviews, because I wasn't going to. lol. But I enjoy reading your stories, but like I said, you don't have to read mine. lol. In my opinion, they suck.
And keep this one up!! Please. lol.

(sorry for the really long review)

Wonderful story. Very dark and sinister. Just how I like them. :D
I'm sorry I could not give a better review, but I can't think enough, tonight, to add anything more.

And... I'm sorry, but what is a sawhorse...?

I enjoyed the similarities in the girls names. It makes me wonder if that's how he chooses his girls, like if he finds them because they think they want to be subs and their names have to do with flowers.

Anyway, your writing style suited the darkness of this story perfectly. Although I couldn't help but facepalm at how stupid Rose seemed to be.
Oh well.

this is a kinda creepy story...it's really good an well written...but kinda creepy...

I'm not quite sure what to think. It's good in a way and well not bad, but grotesque in another. You know. What I don't understand is why Master is the way he is. How does he pick his servents? Just "Oh she's hot, I'll take her."? It's interesting. I'm not sure if I would like to continue or not. FYI -PsychoSweetie- is my older sister. I think she was just mad that someone didn't comment on her actual story. And not to be mean, but not all storues need to start out fast. I don't know where she's going with it yet , but she gets a little...touchy when I don't review. So please try not to take anything to personally. She can be...mean. She's just mad at the moment. Best to avoid her for now. I'll check on your next chap. so update soon!
-B-

I'm sorry but this story was not as good as I'd hoped. It was very disgusting! I didn't like one part of it.
-PsychoSweetie-

wow sickening yet good, keep writing on it please :)

That was really good.
I enjoyed it alot.
Veyr nice ending as well.

- Miss BFC

Killer lines at the end. And so all the women met Master online? Why am I not surprised. (Really, tell me why I'm not surprised!)
~Grey

Death is actually a mercy to Rose, because if she hadn't die, Master would've just kept abusing and raping her. Ah, the next girl...
~Grey

Awesome.
~Grey

Ah, masochism, what a terrible, irrestible delight! His paroxysm of sadistic pleasure was rather interesting. And yes, I'm reviewing each chapter individually because that's just how awesome I am. :)
~Grey

Yay, a twist! I laughed when he said "strip" because it was so blunt. Awesome.
~Grey

Pretty cool story so far.
~Grey

hey! this was actually really amusing; keep it up! i'd like to see a full length story circled around this idea.