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-Danariana- 2009-05-29 . chapter 27
OMG! That was so cute! I absolutely adored the ending! She was so young but who cares! they were in love and perfect for each other! You are in my favourites!
Panda's Archer 2009-05-23 . chapter 27
Ahh, BFAL-chan *teary-eyed smile*

You really like wrapping up your stories with a good ol' proposal, don't you? ^ ^

Would you like to get married at 18? It certainly seems that way hahaha! :P

Anyways, nice little story from you :]

You do like your cliches XD But you write them quite well, so I'm certainly not complaining ;]

Nice jewellery, btw. The ring James gave her sounds astonishingly like MY ring, which I've been wearing ever since the Debutante Ball in 2007 ^ ^

Anyways! Yet again, all your characters got accepted into the same university. Next story, maybe break it up a little and make it a bit more interesting. That way you can even possibly write a sequal about the different paths their lives take.

But! Write something else soon; I'll keep in touch with the next one ;]

Love,

Cherrie/Panda

xxox
ojdvictim09 2009-05-23 . chapter 27
omg,..,i really cant believe its over, thank you so much butterfly angel for writing this story, hope you write more stories even better than this, again thank you so much(5 stars)
LikeOMG 2009-05-22 . chapter 27
In my opinion, nothing really happened after Ryan went out of the picture. The rest of it was just like fillers for a long time and I think you kind of rushed it and didn't really have any .. uhm, plot near the end.
JUST SAYING.
Chloeee 2009-05-22 . chapter 27
Aw what a beautiful ending! Would be cool if there was a sequel maybe of a child of James and Beth. Just wondering. You did a great job with this story! The best! I loved it!
HighOnBrokenWings 2009-05-22 . chapter 27
Aw! That was such a cute ending :D I loved it! I had a feeling that he was going to ask her that :) Its sad that its over. Its like we all wait for the end to come so we can read it, but when its over we all feel a little annoyed that we didnt read it slower. Really good. Well done on ending it happily :) X
HighOnBrokenWings 2009-05-17 . chapter 25
Aw I wish I had a james to cheer me up when Im depressed :'( Great chapter, its going to be sad to see this come to an end. Great chapter. The whole flower thing was so cute :P
ojdvictim09 2009-05-17 . chapter 25
OMG! Next Week?! i really cant believe this, its seems just like yesterday i read the 1 chap and next week it will be the ending.,oh i really really hope that this story will be having a SEQUEL.,.haha,.and BTW,,..GREAT, AWESOME, BRILLANT CHAPTER!
Meganeko 2009-05-16 . chapter 25
Cute story, BFAL-chan!

I read chapter one, and chapter twenty five (I'm lazy like that) and enjoyed both. So I'll go back and read all the rest when I have the time. James is a cute character ^ ^

Looking forward to reading up on their getting-together ;)

Cheerio!

Cherrie/Panda

xoxo
HighOnBrokenWings 2009-05-11 . chapter 24
Great chapter :) Soz it took me so long to read, but yeah, Haha, I want them to do something inapropreate... Lol. Anyway cant wait for the next chappy
ojdvictim09 2009-05-10 . chapter 24
omg,.i really cant wait for the epilogue,.and btw, great chap
poopstik 2009-05-08 . chapter 24
this is a really amazing story ! have you considered writing a sequel ?
Chloeee 2009-05-08 . chapter 24
Put the final chapter and Epilogue up at the same time! No way I'm waiting another week LOL It's a great story, loving it!
ojdvictim09 2009-05-01 . chapter 23
great chap.
imsuperrrbored 2009-04-26 . chapter 22
Sorry, but I think their dialogue is kind of unrealistic. It was SO unrealistic that I was going to stop reading because it was so FAKE.

~ImsuperBored
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