i can totally relate to this

and i also need to learn when to stop falling in love...

i always end up back in the same abysmal pit of heartbrokenness, you know?

good job.

False pretences. Maybe we should live a little.

I liked this but it felt very straightforward. Rehearsed. I couldn't feel the emotion so much. Vary vocabulary perhaps? I'm not sure. Well done with the rhymes. They sounded quite natural.

yeah, but if falling in and out of love were easy, very little art would have been created.

Im sorry you are hurting... you dont deserve it. Is there anything I can do?

this is really good

kudos!