okay for people into horses. i personaly kinda liked it, but it sounds very typical for a horse story. writen well.

OMG i absolutely love this story. Please please continue. i love it and ant wait to read what happens next.

this story is ok, but it seems like and outline, and sometimes it skips around and its hard to get the meaning. But it has a good frame.

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Lol. Oddly, the last part amused me in a way. I love to see horses gallop. Its so pretty. =D I wanna see how the horse is gonna get trained in one week. I'll read on. :D

It's cute, the chemistry Zella and Nashua seem to have between one another. Well, I suppose it's not chemistry, parsay, yet because Zella seems to like Nashua in this chapter, not the opposite. But, I predict in the chapters ahead sparks will fly between the two.

It's nice how you seem to know so much about horses to write the details, the things that they do. ^^ Kody seems to me like he'll be highly annoying because he likes her and all and since he makes her nervous. I cant really say what I predict for him to do in the chapters ahead, for I dont know much about him. He just entered the story so I wouldnt really know.

As for the whole chapter? I think it was very well written. =D I'll read on. Sorry this reviews so long XD