This was so adorable. You just unclichified the best friends falling for each other, if that's possible. :)

Ich habe die Geschichte atemlos verschlungen. Dieses Verschränken von Literatur und Realität ist dir sehr gut gelungen. Die Schulsituation ist gut charakterisiert und dieser Originaltext ist auch sehr schön, aber ich weiß nicht warum: ich habe ein trauriges Ende erwartet.
Gefällt mir aber trotzdem sehr gut.

That was awesome.
Ending was great too, I personally liked the part where they completed eachother's words :P

aww, this was really cute. I think you maybe could've turned this into a few chapter story, but it was pretty good short. I liked how they finished each other's sentences towards the end there. :)

Oh wow. It's beautiful. I LOVE it. I love how they finished each other's sentences when describing the love. And yes, that is EXACTLY what tentative love feels like.