| Reviews for Random Thoughts |
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A.H. Fenald 12/3/08 . chapter 1Wow. This one has to be my favorite poem by far. This poem is so relatable to me. Its kind of scary. I had these excat same thoughts about someone I cared about too...either way, I enjoyed how the beginning was very sure about what you (or the POV) was sure to do, but a little unceratin about the other because people just can't read another person's mind. The questioning is good because it dispells the lovey-doveyness that people feel by asking the question 'Would you do the same for me?' |
DiaRose 12/3/08 . chapter 1Kind of an overused format/idea, but I think it's the kind of poem that you have to write one of to call yourself a poet. As far as they go, this is good. Love, Dia |