brilliant! I'm now going to go read everything you've written on here! I think this is quite good.

Wow, I love the ending. Actually, the whole tone of this is great, vague in a good way and it is kind of like dancing around the rules. I also like how this guy isn't perfect, he could be kind of slobby in a way or anything, but she still obviously likes him. It's great, well done!

Smiles, Danielle)

Lol - confusing but funny.

I love this- so brief and clever and honest. To the point, and yet still vague and kind of mysterious. Love!

haha, the ending was pretty funny, but why is the story so ambiguous? It sounds like you're into pretty punky guys, from this story and the last one I read.