Cool story man. This is the one u were up at 1 for :p
English class? Great description.

i loved it! it's very simple, straight-forward and great! I was creeped out at the end! Jenkins a weirdo and matt seems a goth-right?...Like ur writing style/well, best wishes!

darknessxangel,

Hey, this is probably some of your best writing. There's a lot of similies and descriptiona and stuff which makes it really good. Only thing is the title doesn't really make sense. There's nothing to do with a spider in the story.