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Elephant-Artist 2009-03-08 . chapter 1
Very good imagery. Nice poem. I have nothing bad to say about it. Please read and review my stuff.
she smolders 2008-12-09 . chapter 1
The idea of December always puts me in a sad sort of mood and this poem really reminds me of that. I really love how you worked together mundane actions with the emotions in this poem and the overall tone is just bittersweet & beautiful. Take care.
fairytale failure 2008-12-01 . chapter 1
I like how you connect what the car is doing (the steering wheel and the windshield wipers) to what you are thinking at the time; I especially liked the first three lines. One question - the last line says 'december's come and gone' - was it written a month in the future or almost a year in the past?
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