O! I really like your story! I thihnk it's really interesting. I like all the little plot twists. I think it's just enough to keep the story interesting without overdoing it. Kudos! I can't wait to see more!

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie

i've read your whole story in a day~ please hurry and write more its really good. ^^

also did he finally get his memory back? i need to know~

ME TOO.
I SKATE GOOFY TOO!

this story is absolutely amazing.
good job :D

Omg what a place to stop...I love this story. I was totally shocked at Jackson's suicide...and that he was the father of Macy's child. This is the first story in a long time that has completely engrossed me. Can't wait for the next to chapters.

I had a weird dream. It was about large messy rooms with towers and I couldn't leave the room because I was trying to find something. It was annoying and when I gave up on that room I would go to another large messy room with towers made out of weird stuff.

It was freaking weird. I woke up with a headache. I think I found what I was looking for to but now I don't remember it. I think it was a pad of paper...like a legal notepad.

Weird.

ANYHOW! AH! Autumn is remembering! AH! OH CRAP! HE IS GOING TO BE ALL, "Why are you butt fucking me?" Then Summer will have to bash his head in to make him forget again. Drama.

ohmygosh, he's starting to remember! why only two more chapter, weren't there going to be 23 of them? *puppy eyes* I wonder if he's going to remember everything at once, or... anyway... :D

OMG, how did that happen? Did Jackson kill himself because he thought it was Dan's baby that Macy is carrying?

When I think of Summer and Autumn's relationship it's like watching a trainwreck in slow-motion for some reason; I have my theories, we'll see how right/wrong I was.
Anyway, great story, hope you update soon! *hint*

I'm a little confused: in the beginning of this chapter Summer's 18, then towards the end you say he's 20.

doesn't really matter, though. I love their friends, Saber and Evan seem cute together. :)

I love it, him, they. Summer had such a...not summery attitude when he was little, while Autumn is so...sunny, at least that's how I feel him.

Great first chapter! (feel ridiculous saying it when I'm about to read the rest of the story, but nevertheless)

"Ah, finally, some relief. Even though I knew it was just a placebo."

Is that correct use of the word "placebo?" I thought it meant something else, but I may be wrong.

oh damn macy.

oh its so sweet
I love it
I also like that you dont write the sex scenes...and your story is still addictive
proof of its awesomeness is that people keep reading it when they dont get porn..hehe
anyway very cool

I love Jackson.

He wasn't even an important character.

Now he is. And he is gone!

YOU KILLED HIM!

Sigh. Macy is a whore...loveher.

wow... thats gotta suck does macy like jackson? or well.. DID she wow that would suck... hm i fro one know (or hope/belive) that when u get amnesia... ur feeling are still there SO i KNO that Autumn loved Summy b4 the crash! hopw he gets his memory back! POST SOON! U ROX! XD