id be happy if i cud right that well be4 the end of college

A very original idea and as usual the last line takes the cake. Great integration of nature again, each representing different things and saving you words :)

I really enjoyed this, i especially liked the contrast between the fire, and then Death's cold embrace. Keep up the good work!:)

You did a great job keeping the dark imagry and keeping the rhyming scheme. I didn't even realize it rhymed the first time I read through it. That's how it should be. Great job!

the ending is very true. i love this piece it really speaks to me and a lot of the lines really stand out in this. This piece is strong the whole way through. It is in my opinion one of your best and strongest.

Beautiful! This is your best one!

Wow... I can't believe you wrote this in third class! Like SomeoneToLove said, if we'd been good friends back then we would have gotten to read something really good. Wah! No fair! I had to wait like 5 years! :):)

This is really good, and I like the idea behind it!

I wish we'd known each other better in 3rd class...I could have read it sooner!

You're really talented so keep it up!

Simple and to the point.