|Reviews for Journey|
| Westy 8/27/09 . chapter 1
id be happy if i cud right that well be4 the end of college
| wo bu ai ni le 6/11/09 . chapter 1
A very original idea and as usual the last line takes the cake. Great integration of nature again, each representing different things and saving you words :)
| Redlove124 6/10/09 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this, i especially liked the contrast between the fire, and then Death's cold embrace. Keep up the good work!:)
| Magic8ballgenie 1/20/09 . chapter 1
You did a great job keeping the dark imagry and keeping the rhyming scheme. I didn't even realize it rhymed the first time I read through it. That's how it should be. Great job!
| Imperia 12/9/08 . chapter 1
the ending is very true. i love this piece it really speaks to me and a lot of the lines really stand out in this. This piece is strong the whole way through. It is in my opinion one of your best and strongest.
| EJ 12212012 12/7/08 . chapter 1
Beautiful! This is your best one!
| AStrangerToYou 12/4/08 . chapter 1
Wow... I can't believe you wrote this in third class! Like SomeoneToLove said, if we'd been good friends back then we would have gotten to read something really good. Wah! No fair! I had to wait like 5 years! :):)
| SomeoneToLove 12/2/08 . chapter 1
This is really good, and I like the idea behind it!
I wish we'd known each other better in 3rd class...I could have read it sooner!
You're really talented so keep it up!
| LostInMe 12/1/08 . chapter 1
Simple and to the point.