the contrast between the title and the mood of the poem is really thought-provoking. (in the good way ]) i don't know if you did it on purpose, but the play on the saying "wearing your heart on your sleeve" is great.

deep and frightning. are we related?

short but powerfull. :)

very good.

xxfaith

Aw, this is so sad. I love the writing though. It's wonderful how you exaggerated the smile, made it sound like a silly thing to be doing, and then you showed something that seems to make a little more sense, no matter how sad it is. Great job.

Love,

Dia

O.O

This was amazing! Deep, something I could relate to, something that touched me (god I sound cheesey)

Defenitely going on favs.