  Scholar 2009-01-01 . chapter 1 —Mechanics—Jadalycya
—Originality—Faelein
—Best—Chiomi |
| Scholar 2009-01-01 . chapter 6 I loved the message in this. You said that you didn't do very well with the supernatural, but I think that with a little work it could be pretty good. All you have to do is watch out for the grammatical errors;) |
| Scholar 2009-01-01 . chapter 5 I liked the structure of this story and how everything came together at the end. Since this is something I have trouble with, I admire you for being able to do that. :) All I'd suggest is looking at your sentences more closely, sometimes they can be a little rough around the edges. Other than that, I thought it was really good! |
  Catseye*Rose 2009-01-01 . chapter 1Mechanics: Chiomi
Originality: Faelein
Best: Chiomi |
 henred5 2009-01-01 . chapter 1The entries were all fab this itme orund...yet again, so hard to choose!
Mechanics: BlackCat
Originality: Chiomi
Best: Watchdog |
| henred5 2009-01-01 . chapter 6 Hey it's not too bad! I really didn't expect to learn that Steve had died in an accident. Very strange. But it was canny good! I'd say try dabbling your hand in the supernatural again just to see how it comes out. |
| henred5 2009-01-01 . chapter 5 Not to bad, I'd love to read more n the background of this strange possible world of the future. |
| henred5 2009-01-01 . chapter 4 Ah, a happy ending :D YAYS!
Would look better if polished up a bit. |
| Scholar 2008-12-31 . chapter 4 This story was really good, but you left a lot of potential unused in some placed. I thought that the banter was pretty funny, there were just some places that had either too little or too much detail. Proof reading would have helped on some of the mechanical errors, and although I'm probably not going to vote for this on mechanics, I still feel that it has a good chance of winning on something else, nonetheless. Good job:). |
 Tronion 2008-12-30 . chapter 1Mechanics: Chiomi
Originality: BlackCat
Best: BlackCat |
 faelein 2008-12-28 . chapter 4Best - Jadalycya
Mechanics - Watchdog
Originality - Chiomi |
 TaeliaV 2008-12-28 . chapter 1Mechanics: Jadalycya
Originailty: Faelein
Best: BlackCat |
| henred5 2008-12-28 . chapter 3 Ok cut out the M rated stuff and it was kinda weird. I can see how you took the whole 'big bad wolf' thing. Was funny when the wolf got shot in the end though. Lols |
| henred5 2008-12-28 . chapter 2 LOVED IT! Really I did, its very original and in parts quite cute. |
| giraffie (Mari, I think lol) 2008-12-26 . chapter 3 Best: Becka and the Big, Bad Wolf by Chiomi. I don't know why, but this really called to me.
Originality: Penpals are Meant for Sleep Deprived People, by BlackCat. I thought this was really fun and easy to read, and it never got boring.
Mechanics: Untitled Titled Story, by Jadalycya. Nearly faultless, and flowed very well.
Great job to everyone! |
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