What a long journey! Great writing-style1

Maybe if you've been a little discriptive, like for example describing the airport or the sceneries you saw or anything like it, it would be better..and try to describe the reunion thing: she hugged you, she said she missed you or anything like that, it feels more humanic...but i dunno, maybe you meant it this way..?

You really have a great writing style but just try to be discriptive, and sry if i bothered you- just a few notes.

Goodluck! ^_^