Very interesting. I am not Christian, though my family is, but this poem is very well written, and conveys a point that many people believe. This is in fact what first made my question the Christian religion, and why I can never tell my family that I am not like them. Your word choice is well thought out and clearly says what you feel-good job.

True words. You make your point really well in this.

That was really good. Nice points. The rythmn in the beginning was a little shaky, but it picked up. Really enjoyed it!

Truly,
Twyla Cole