Just remember, we all fall short of his greatness. Again great job.

this is a nice spiritual poem. the only bothered me was the word "mold" i don't know, it didn't seem right to me. other than that though i enjoyed it:)

This had a nice flow. Though the last line didn't seem to fit in with everything else.

Never the less, its a really good peice.

Keep up the good work.

Beautiful. Short and Simple- :D

God Bless

Adia

Omg I love this.

"Do with me as you wish."

I adore lines like this, and the sense of absolute trust and love for Him. I don't know what to say anymore o_o I can't comment on poems that are absolutely amazing because there's just nothing to say! LOVED IT!

fleur

I think its a perfect view of a "christian". Really they are puppets to a book that may or may not be real. Good use of words; and if your wondering no I do not believe in god.

This is an intresting poem. Some things to consider:

1. "Mold me" could be "Mould me to reflect your perfect grace."

2. "Use me" could be "Use me as an example of your infinite mercy."

This is an intresting poem/prayer.

Peace.