|Reviews for Can and Can't|
| fivesandsevens 12/16/08 . chapter 1
Chills down my back.
Tears down my cheecks.
You read the thoughts from my mind
You heard the cries from my heart
You saw the pain of my soul
You transformed it all
Turned them into beautifully sorrowful words
But you have never met me
I have never known you
How can this be?
| major-prep-707 12/5/08 . chapter 1
I love your style, so to the point and direct. Your work is so raw and true, it's amazing. Keep it up!
| maximusrexmundi 12/4/08 . chapter 1
eh im gonna have to agree, too many commas. I like the formating for emphasis though! very well done. I really hate situations like that. You cant escape unless everything goes either right or wrong.
| 4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis 12/3/08 . chapter 2
no problem! I'm happy to help; it really makes my day, and it just did. ]
I don't think it was overkill with the commas. great job.
| Broken Winged Bird 12/3/08 . chapter 1
Very sad and sweet. It's true, too. There's some people that you can't live with and can't live without at the same time. And i love how you put the letters that spell "Cassie" into the poem and pointed them out. that was a clever trick
i don't think you overused commas, i think it's fine.
And i really like this poem. it's very touching. definitely a fave and C2
| pixy dust and fairytales 12/3/08 . chapter 1
great piece, I really liked it. Very real. I didn't think you over used commas, either. :)
| socks-lost 12/3/08 . chapter 1
I think the comma issue is fine. I didn't even notice it until you pointed it out. I like the concept of the piece. I think its really honest and truthful. I like how you can say so much in such little words. Anyway, awesome! Keep it up!