Another gripping story as always! :)

I loved your descriptions and Dyx's attitude in general. He's makes a great and compelling hero.

You have such attention to detail and a fine understanding of combat and weaponry that makes themstory convincing and interesting.

The planet you concocted and it's features are intriguing...a little reminiscent of Tatooine I might venture. But still very much your own.

Ah! I was hoping for more, but you know how I feel by now. :)

Dyx and this story have a lot of potential!

I find it that your last update was on my 17th birthday...hehehe

XOXO

AH!

you're amazing, I love this.

Nice to have you back too. Is the boss some kind of robot machine mind thing? And I can't get onto my story or user stats either. Must be a glitch or something. I'm sure it'll get fixed soon enough.

Your welcome.

I do believe theres more than "a bit of company." Can I say A CRAP LOAD OF SOLDIERS COMING AFTER THEM? I do believe I'm right.

Anyway, this is a good story. Very good. Keep it up my friend! Keep it up.

Undrahas

Nice chapter. I found myself smiling or laughing on multiple occasions.

"Because of a genetic mutation, his eyes were pitch black." Oh, wow. This right here totally reminds me of the black eyed kids urban legend, and I wish it didn't because seeing pictures of what those creepy kids are supposed to look like is really unnerving.

Um, well, I can't access my story stats because I don't have any stories posted, so hopefully someone else can help you out with that. I can access my account settings, however, if that's what you mean by user stats...

Glad you at least managed to get some of your writing back. I really need to back up my harddrive over christmas. Been meaning to do that for a while now.

So is he emitting pheremones or something? That could be somewhat useful.

StarSplit

Huh. Interesting setting you have there, with everything artifical and all. It almost makes the story a little surreal in a way. And it's ironic how that women's name was Miss White when everything's, well, you know, white.

Good to see you back, too, by the way!

Welcome back! This is a very good start. I love how you waited till the middle of this story to give his name. Thats awesome! This promises to be one of your best stories.

Undrahas