This poem was good, I really liked the line "she's as cold as marble but not nearly as soft" beacuse marble is not soft, its a really great use of paradox, however I did not quiet understand the point you where trying to get across. I didn't like it because of the confusion. Nonetheless it is a great poem in all, I especially liked the use of imagery in the line "The King of my world, and I can't be dethroned", for me any way :) Good work.

Oh my goodness! Beautiful as always, Julia, I love this.

Love
~Dia