Oh God, that was angsty. But it was good. I could have done without the swear words- but I understand that sometimes you feel so very strongly that you must use them. I know, been there done that.

I really liked this. I'm a total sucker for heart ache poetry. I'm sorry you had to go through it. And I know how it feels. Do I ever. I like the line breaks. I think I need to do that to separate my verses... Anyway.

"Still I'm shocked when it is through"