I like this story. All the twists and turns it took...very nice. Can't wait for the next one from you!

Ok, so I seriously just said, "What the hell?!" when Charles was alive. The man is frickin' awesome! And he's a cat, I know he is.
I can't wait to read more!!

They...killed...Charles...but he was so cool! AH! (tear)
I hope part three comes soon...I can't wait!

The guard Dorian makes me think of The Portrait of dorian Gray that I just read...cool book.
Love this story, just so ya know.

Wow. I have a feeling she's going to escape though...

But...but...Madeline can't betray them. Her and Joseph were in love...but she tricked him, didn't she? God! She was so cool! Curious about her past now.

Will we see the gods again? They would be useful in battle against France. Like the dead in Lord of the Rings!
I like Merkon, he's cool (did I say that already?).

Did you know that in ancient mythology the gods often tried- and sometimes succeeded-killed their people because they were not pleased with how the people acted? Yay for psychotic mythology!
Anyway, cool chapter. Gonna keep going.

Love it! I like Merkon, but something about him makes me not want to trust him...I don't know what though. Hm...
Oh well, hope you update soon!

Yay! I love them all! I liked the priestess too, even thought she was barely in it. She seems like she could kick butt.
Can't wait for part two! How many parts will there be?

Ok the candle part reminded me of the Star Trek Next Generation episode where Crusher's grandma dies and she meets this guy who's relly a spirit thing that only exists because of the light that's burning.
Is all of this happening inside the volcano? I'm kinda confused, but I like it. I like that Madeline can fight. She's awesome.

I'm with Charles on this one. Joseph is being foolish. He'll come around though, I know it.
I love Basil. He seems like he is usually always happy, but because his daughter is gone, he is sad. Poor Basil.

YAY! Charles is AWESOME! I can't wait for him to kick Edward's butt!

Holy crap Jean-Pierre died. I liked him. Oh well, Sir Joseph is alive and so is his love! Now can we find out who the guy is?

Aw, Joseph's in love. Cool. Maybe the mystery man will be revealed soon...I like the humor he had.
Can't wait for another update!