This left me really confused. I couldn't connect with the characters and the story line seemed almost random at times.

this story is so ** up and so well written, I absolutely love it, like it just gives me the chills cuz I always visualize what I read (pretty sure other people do that too...but whatever) and the ferris wheel part is always so entrancing...yea. Can't wait to see the next part of this story.

I really like this. Especially the psychological crime part, it's very interesting without the old "Sherlock Homes" mystery feel. It's realistic and is one of the more mature stories I've read on this site so far. The beginning of chapter 3 was probably my favourite. I'm not sure why, but this story is very interesting to me. I like it a lot, please keep writing.

This is an extremely well written chapter, i especially love the opening paragraph. Can't wait to read how it all ends.
Keep up with the good work

Peace~x

That was brilliantly written! I can't wait till you put on chapter 3!
It's funny because i have just gone through a psychology exam!
Superb piece of work!
Bravo

Peace~x

The kiss was a bit predictable, but I love the character of the Chief. As for me, of course I think he's guilty of murder. My favorite line, was "I have no motive. You do."
Really interesting, looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh, I'm intrigued! Scary, that was. Poor James; dead people are not fun to look at...Anyways, keep on updatin'!!

As an afterthought, compliments on WereCAT. It was a good read. :)

dan is the killer. dum dum dum