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The Blood-stained Wolf 2009-03-11 . chapter 1
Stunning. The truth about the human race lies within the walls of these words. Caring for others but never the one that truly matters. Bravo!
StarStudent 2008-12-04 . chapter 1
I love this, possibly just because it's 100%v relatable for me at the moment!
You've captured the emotion perfectly, great job!
Aamori 2008-12-04 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really good. The idea was something pple encounter everyday but rarely think about as a subject for poetry. However, I think it could have been a bit smoother in some place, like:
"So I'm pretty sure you're not

It hurts too much to think of you as a friend

When you treat me like I'm not"

I think the wording could have been better, but overall it was a great poem.
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