|Reviews for The Obstinate Rose|
| kynthiaphellan 7/17/09 . chapter 45
I personally think whether you use a divider or not it'll be alright. I do like the without-divider idea better though.
| CinderellaWithCombatBoots 7/16/09 . chapter 45
I think you should leave the part where Dan grabs Bekah's shoulders and where she wakes up, I mean, it was good for the sudden contrast between that and Bekah coming back reality. I don't know if it was just me and my Einstein intelligence (pfft. yeah, right) but I understood it and liked it. But I think you need to go with what you feel is better. It's your choice here.
| Lady Knight 1512 7/15/09 . chapter 45
Hey again! So, I had a look through the chapter and it all came together nicely, I thought. The addition of the notebook and the continued references to alcohol work here and will pull out well into the second story. As for the divider, well, I don't think it's necessary. The way it is now, is almost like it's inside her head as she's lying there on her bed, but then she stops herself before she reaches the most painful part. So yeah, leave the divider out.
Thanks again for the little acknowledgment. I'm always happy to help in any way I can. :)
| Lady R 7/15/09 . chapter 45
I think this was by far one of my favorite chapters! So worth the wait, (in fact I was just thinking the other day to send you a PM, but decided to be patient instead LOL). This was so beautifully written, I could actually feel & picture what was happening as I read it. That one time, though, it was a little confusing and I had to re-read that part just to make sure I knew what was going on. Your choice of songs...those were just great and added to the emotions very nicely.
Whether or not there should be a divider? I don't think putting one there would lessen the emotion or the mystery, but I think it would lessen the confusion.
Looking forward to the sequel!
| pbgurl 7/15/09 . chapter 45
:0 Wow... This was an amazing chapter. It made me tear up. And I'm very excited for the sequel!
| mandyyyy 7/9/09 . chapter 43
Oh, and also. If you decide to no longer post on fictionpress due to the insane amount of plagiarism going on, do you think you could send me the link? I'd really appreciate it.
| mandyyyy 7/9/09 . chapter 44
So I just re-read this whole story. :) It is quite amazing, the way you paint the pictures between Dan and Rebekah... You are such a great writer and I feel almost addicted to their relationship and to see what happens next. I'm a Christian myself, and its so good to be able to read a story such as yours that shows some of the struggles that humans go through.
I think that its simply awesome that you write things that you can live with, instead of trying to please the masses. Its very inspiring!
| SAD-Fangirl 7/6/09 . chapter 44
Hi, I was reading your profile and I'm very sad that you're not going to continue with this story ;( so sad that I actually cried a little because I would never get to find out what happens with Dan and Roses' relationship... You put in your last chapter that you are still working on it but i also read that you weren't going to continue with it anymore :( What are you actually going to do with this story? I PLEAD that you continue with it or many of your readers will be very sad especially me ;( This story has really touched me and your WRITING is just AMAZING! You really should publish it or something! It's THAT GOOD! Urgh, this is gonna sound so silly! but I might die of depression if you abandon this story :( I don't mean to be rude btw demanding you and everything! I'm just voicing my thoughts :) or typing... :P x
| Lady R 6/9/09 . chapter 44
Just want to make sure you let me know where I can go to read your stories should you stop posting on FP. As for the last chapter, I don't think there is anything that has to be answered now and not in the sequel. I'm still looking forward to seeing the Brian/Allison connection in the sequel.
| JC23polyanthus 6/8/09 . chapter 44
I am adding this story on my favourite 're such a talented it has some heavy Christian theme,and I'm a Muslim,though I don't think it matters,as the love story between Dan and Bekah just transcient through those such thing,and it touches me as a ..you really captured me.I'm wondering why you're not a published author?BTW,do tell me where I could read da last chapter,please?
| VampiressAJ 6/7/09 . chapter 44
wow it's getting intense. and now bekahs mom reveals a lil about herself. love it though. sorry i havent been commenting and stuff lately. ive been down in the dumps. anywho yeah update soon and i want to know if u switch sites. :)
| alphobeto 6/6/09 . chapter 44
Would you please be able to send the link to me aswell please? Once you have it, of course.
Email is, .uk
| kynthiaphellan 6/6/09 . chapter 44
Jesus, what is going on? Everyone's talking about this whole plaigirism thing that I know nothing about? Could you please tell me what's going on?
Oh yeah,in the last chap., Brian needs to get served.
| Lady Knight 1512 6/6/09 . chapter 44
Hey, I've been meaning to talk to you about this. I have to say, I'm glad you've decided what you've decided. Last week, one of my other fave authors got plagiarised and took everything down. It really decided me, i have to say. I've finally decided NOT to put 'Long Road Home' up. I'll send chapters to you, of course, coz i trust you. And i have friends who have friends who will be able to read it and give me some feedback, which is really just what i wanted anyway: someone who didn't know the whole story to read it and tell me what's going through their minds.
Anyway, i hope i'm going to be one of those people who gets to see this private site of yours. We've come so far.
Also! I started a Livejournal yesterday, which i'm going to use as a blog for writing and fiction. You probably don't have one, but i've set it to public so everyone can see it. If you're interested (not that there's much on it at the moment, give me a few weeks) i'm going to put a link on my profile page. :)
| JC23polyanthus 6/5/09 . chapter 10
i like this chapter..it put a smile on my i av a teacher that's brave enough to do what Dan did.. : )