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Air Rey 2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Witty! The start of each line beginning with the letters of the alphabet. Your theme is romantic but you used a children's literature structure that creates romanticism for children. Maybe, you could put more depth by adding how much you love nature or other implications. All in all, this is a wonderful piece of work. Good job!
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