So far so good, let's see if you finish it

Oh, you are so a Gilmore Girls fan. And you love Paris. How do I know this? Because Heather is Paris, haha. I love her. She's my favorite character in this story. That might seem kind of lame because she's sort of a background character, but whatever. She has a name so she matters. My AP Lit. teacher always said, "Once a character has a name, it automatically means they're important, and now we have to figure out why." :]

I seriously hate it when people say "Wow, I'm so good-looking" and actually mean it. God. It's very annoying.

Hence, some (well most) of your characters do not really elicit much sympathy from the responders.

I LOVE Alex Rider books! =)

Awesome chapter btw!

i. am dead.
i'm pretty sure i died somewhere around chapter fifteen.
but seriously man, this is just so, freakin aergtkjlhery.
that's what it is.
i'm gunna shut up now, cuz you have like 43592456987Q67 other people to tell you how AWESOME you are.
bye now.

awwe this is so perfecty cant wait for the next chapter :D

Actually...forgive me for asking. But I was just wondering. So, both Brody and Felicia were virgins, right? Then why did Brody just randomly and conveniently have a condom in his wallet? I'm just wondering. In any case, yeah, I agree now - them having sex was kind of necessary. It was like an epiphany, I get you.

I can't believe she's finally off the list! Whoo! LOL. I'm really excited for your final chapter so please (please, please, please) update soon! :D

More, more, more! ;D I want Effie to see drawings of her

hahaha bout time they got together lovin the storii cant wait till nxt chapter

From what I can tell, your story is really interesting and seems pretty funny. You're a good writer and I can't wait to find out what else happens between Felicia and Brody :)

oh do please update!
your story is wonderful!

I love you.
not in a creeper way,
or an i know you way.
but an I admire you and all you do kind of way.
update soon.
please,
:]

Can I please stab Ashley with a plastic fork?
Pretty please?
It's only a plastic fork.
Pretty please with cherries on top?
Oh, okay. I'll control myself. Hahaha.

Anyway, I love this story. I know a ton of people have probably told you that, but I completely mean it. Finding something this well-written on Fiction Press is a rarity. Also, I think you've already developed your own voice and your personality just oozes through in every chapter.

Love it. I'm kind of sad it's almost finished.

Yay! They're together!

The Resolution is an awesome song!

Great chap!