|Reviews for The Inexplicable State of Being There|
| Has A WaywithWords 1/1/09 . chapter 6
Cute! And I read the author's note as well. I actually like Ashley. She's dating Brody, big deal. I mean sure, Felicia and Brody will get together some day because we all love happy romantic endings. But, not with out some drama tied in the mix! I love Micki by the way, she's funny. And Nick and her should totally get together! Anyway, update soon!
| greenestar 1/1/09 . chapter 6
Yeah...so boo to Ashley. Her moving to fast is kind of killing things.
And are Nick and Miki gonna hook up? Because I think that would be super cute!
| tinkerbell-92 1/1/09 . chapter 6
not sure where its going
or if i am going to like it or not
but it seems interesting...
| IndigoAzucena 1/1/09 . chapter 6
Thank you for updating!
(I just turned 18 too... doesn't feel very different)
| White Rabbit Tale 1/1/09 . chapter 6
This is fantastic. Update it right now. There's something really natural about your writing style, and your characters are leagues beyond the gimmicky teen romance-y characters you usually find in this stories (my own work is not exempt from gimmicky, teen romance). It just seems so much more...real. You don't really see that kind of uncertain, ambiguous interaction in fiction, but it's actually much more genuine. You even use the girl-is-oblivious-to-her-own-feelings trope realistically. Usually it's just like...wow, you're pretty stupid...but Felicia is conflicted and layered enough to where it makes sense.
Also Nick awesome. Totally love him as a secondary character. I also like Kyoko, but that could be in part because I know a Kiyoko.
And Micki is the perfect little sister/best friend. She reminds me of myself (I have older siblings). Totally snarky and sarcastic.
Anyway, like I said. Update this shit! I want chapter 7 already. This is my new favorite story.
| WalkingUnnoticed 1/1/09 . chapter 6
Yay! another chapter! And it was great! Yay!
| Kisnie 1/1/09 . chapter 6
I like this story. :]] Just started reading it today, and I can't wait for the next chapter! n_n
| Only4Miken 1/1/09 . chapter 1
Love it. Splitting the POVs was perfect.
| zoner04 12/29/08 . chapter 5
so i just started reading this. and i really like the idea. its cool.
sorry about the bad review im leaving. tired.
hope you update soon :]
| WithoutException 12/25/08 . chapter 5
Interesting! I like that you've actually made Ashley a nice person, and not a jerk.
| Alora The Sleepy 12/24/08 . chapter 5
so I know I promised a long review this time but I'm actuallyon a road trip with my family and am using my ipodto access the Internet so its kinda hard to type ad you may be able to tell. So long review NEXT time. So basically, cute, brody is adorable and I like where this story is going. Update soon!
| daling 12/21/08 . chapter 5
i like it. hehe.
| WalkingUnnoticed 12/20/08 . chapter 5
this story is so good-i cant wait for more!
| Narq 12/20/08 . chapter 5
That romancy bit was fun
I liked the way how you're playing around... the two main characters are bound to get together somehow... aren't they?
| insanity-ward 12/19/08 . chapter 5
wicked chapter! and Lol. can't wait til Brody "needs" Felicia, Lmao. luved the chapter! also cant wait to see more BrodyxFelicia! update soon! ]