|Reviews for The Inexplicable State of Being There|
| kelse-a-bells 12/13/08 . chapter 4
I think Arizona Iced Tea is better than chocolate milk...
And oh my god! Yay! -Hugs you.- This was adorable!
And...chapter five is done!
| Alora The Sleepy 12/13/08 . chapter 4
Love it. I can't leave a long review this time - I apologize. I have chores to do, so next time I'll ramble lots, OK? )
Update soon! D
| greenestar 12/13/08 . chapter 4
I AM SUPER IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! UPDATE SUPER FAST! IT'S LIKE OMG GOOD!
And yes, those caps are me shouting! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! It makes me sad that this is the last chapter you have up! :(
| greenestar 12/13/08 . chapter 3
I really like this story it's REALLY cute! Love the characters!
| SatelliteHeart 12/13/08 . chapter 4
Awesome! Update soon please! thx. :D
| greenestar 12/13/08 . chapter 1
It's really cute! I like it! Keep it up!
| da 12/13/08 . chapter 4
the reason he could draw it so nicely was because the truth was HE WAS IN LOVE with her
| K. Molle 12/13/08 . chapter 4
m chocolate milk...i loved that stuff. Chocolate milk and hashbrowns! yummy! Anyways very good; brody to me is a slight creeper and he reminds me of one of my character Shane Valentine who is also a creeper. i look forward to reading more.
| Heather1234 12/11/08 . chapter 3
aw this story
is amazing and i
| Titanium Heart 12/11/08 . chapter 3
Best chapter...yet. Keep it up. I hate to wait. :D Love this story, btw. :)
| NeonPufferfish 12/10/08 . chapter 3
wow I love this thing so much its cool!
I love David and Ryan and I really want them to
thanks for the story
| kelse-a-bells 12/10/08 . chapter 3
I'm so impatient.
I really want them to kiss. xD
- xo Juliet
| happyfulgrace 12/10/08 . chapter 3
I think the conquest list was pretty good and Felicia was kinda funny too when she found out!
| Narq 12/10/08 . chapter 3
haha! I laughed when he said: you looked 'hot'... cliche, but works every time :)
| Alora The Sleepy 12/10/08 . chapter 3
I like this. I mean, it's a bit early on in the story to be saying this for sure, but I think I like Leesh. Which is good because I have this problem with hating MCs. But I think I like Leesh. So well done.
Brody, of course, I like very much also. P He's original. Neither character is popular or seems overly concerned with social ranking. It's just kind of... they're there. D But I have to say, I was kinda disappointed when I read the summary. I had a similar (and obviously not overly original) idea a while back about next door neighbor love interests. But now that I've read it, I can see that's the only thing in common. Not least of all because MINE started with him throwing snails at her window just for the sake of it. So, yeah, my characters kinda hate each other. P So, it's good, they're not the same.
But I have this idea in my head now of how I want Leesh and Brody's first kiss to be. Ready: Leesh is undressing for him and he just can't take it anymore because he's realised he's so in love with her, then he notices her parent's car leaving the driveway, so runs out of his house and into her's and kisses her. Then Micki walks into his room and sees them kissing through the open blinds and wolf whistles through the window. Ehehe. If they don't kiss like that, I'll just add in a scene in my mind where they have a fight or something and that's the make-up scene. Lol.
Anyway. Update soon, yeah? D