|Reviews for Shift|
| Revamp 2/5/13 . chapter 19
I wonder if Saki ran into another assassin, and what of Hitomi and Takako? This is pulling me in and filling my head with questions. I really love it so far.
| Revamp 2/5/13 . chapter 18
Interesting character development not only from Yuki, but Saki and Hiroshi as well. I like the depth displayed in , and I'm interested in what happened to Saki.
| Revamp 2/5/13 . chapter 17
Yuki's new shirt was entertaining, and I loved the training session betwen he and Ayumi. You left me off with a cliffhanger, I wonder if Saki's fate will be the same as the other girl who disappeared or if she's just out trying to solve the mystery.
| Revamp 2/4/13 . chapter 15
Interesting sequence about the void swallowing Yuki. I think it's a nice symbolism for the manifestation if fear, as well as an untamed power controlling you if it's not controlled in turn.
| Revamp 2/4/13 . chapter 14
I'm definitely interested in this mystery and who is lying and why. Definitely going to keep reading.
| Revamp 2/4/13 . chapter 13
I wonder what was up with the fairy. Who she was and more importantly where she went. Is she connected to the disappearance or is there another assassin out for Yuki?
This is a very nice chapter full of mystery and whimsy.
| Revamp 2/1/13 . chapter 12
A lot happened in this chapter, but so far I am really enjoying your storyline. This new feudal setting is interesting as well. Yuki's family are also intriguing. I love it when seemingly minor characters get depth that makes them more human.
| Revamp 2/1/13 . chapter 11
Now I've definitely got a lot of questions, not only about Yuki but the rest of his family as well. I wonder abo_t thier parents deaths and if the others were there ti witness it.
| Revamp 2/1/13 . chapter 10
It seems seeing his family members in danger made him realize that there would come a moment where he would have to rely on himself.
I love the blood concept. I have used a similar concept in a couple of stories of mine and it adds a haunting, macabre sense to the chapters.
Now, I shall read ahead and see how Yuki deals with his new weapon and powers.
| Revamp 1/31/13 . chapter 9
You've got to feel bad for poor Yuki. I take it this blood house was part of the teaser in the pilot? I wonder how it will play out in the next chapter. I'll read it later for now, my phone is dying so I'm headed out. Read more soon.
| Revamp 1/31/13 . chapter 8
This was an interesting chapter. It seems Saki and Ayumi are on neutral terms at the moment. I can't help but wonder what new foes await Yuki and co.
| Revamp 1/31/13 . chapter 7
The more I read on Ayumi, the more I want to ask questions about her kind and thier powers. The fight had me on edge, and now I worry about Yuki's state and how he will handle future battles.
I also like the sense of tension between Saki and Ayumi. The strength of thier personalities are prevelant.
| Revamp 1/31/13 . chapter 6
I wonder who saved Yuki now. I'm going to read ahead and find out.
Also listening to rock was fitting to this battle.
| Revamp 1/31/13 . chapter 5
This chapter was a rush of information. I wonder why Yuki's parents never told him he was adopted and how they tie in with the king of Ayumi's people. Better yet, who are Ayumi's people and what were thier powers used for?
I am intrigued.
| Revamp 1/23/13 . chapter 4
Ayumi's character is interesting but I think Saki is my favorite female character so far. I also wonder if I'll be seeing more of Yumi as the story unfolds.
I'm definitely hooked on this story. Glad I had some down time to read it. Sorry my reviews are short. I'm reading this on mobile.