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dragonflydreamer 2009-05-24 . chapter 1
[When mountains blend with melting clouds]
I loved this line. There's something about this image that I really like. You also described it very well with the feeling of them melting into each other.

In fact, I love your descriptions in general. I was going to go through and comment on specific lines, but I they were all so well-written that I didn't see the need. The images created are so beautiful I found myself wishing that such a perfect place existed, and all of your wording was very unique.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
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