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BloodyRoseSharpThorn 2009-11-12 . chapter 9
Love this! Please update again soon!
crack the sky 2009-08-15 . chapter 2
elvis is awesome, but i like kurt cobain's music more. no denying that elvis was amazing, though - both elvises! yours and the king (:
frogs of war 2009-07-11 . chapter 9
I find it kind of weird that Elvis had the conversation in front of Brett's friends. I could more easily have imagined that Elvis opened his mouth and Brett pulled him aside, then his friend followed and overheard. I just can't see Brett, as in the closet as he is, letting Elvis out him in front of the two people that he works the hardest to hide it from.

And I think the reconciliation with Quentin was rushed, especially after they hadn't seen each other in a week (a few weeks?) and the fact Elvis spoke about Brett the way he did.

But I liked the story.
Round About Parker 2009-07-03 . chapter 9
I meant to review a few days ago, but I lost access to the internet. So,now that I have it back, I get to tell you how much I enjoyed this story (that's how well it stuck with me.) There's something about Elvis that's just so... appealing. I'm not sure if that's the word I want... but I just ended up falling for him, even as he transitions from throughout the story. This story is just so sweet and real in it's teenager-y-ness.
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-06-08 . chapter 9
XD
OH MY GOD THIS IS GREAT!
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-06-08 . chapter 4
you know...i have this nagging feeling about this "Casey" person...mostly because all of the "Casey's" i know are guys...
o_O
Scarlett Smile 2009-04-11 . chapter 9
I got the perfect ending :) Oh..I've been searching this site for a story like this since I first joined. You are a great writer and I really really REALLY enjoyed this story. Not only is the plot really unique, but your grammar is excellent too.(A story with good grammar is hard to come by on the internet sometimes, ya know?) Anyways thanks for a GREAT read and now...a new fav story! :)
RockRollGeekFreak 2009-03-14 . chapter 9
yayayayayayayayayayayayayayay!

im SOSOSOSO SORRY!! for not replying in ages, im trying to make my way through all my fp emails, and ive finally gotten to yours


YAY! i love love LOVED IT!! (can you tell im hyper by my overuse of capitals?) but anyways...aww quentin...i just want to say...i want his i *heart* books t-shirt...with him in it...actually...he can have no tshirt on aswell...no need for gift wrapping, ill just be riping it off anyways

XD made my day XD

xoxRRGF
UlTiMaTe KaI LuVa 2009-03-12 . chapter 9
Yay~~ I'm really happy now ~~ looking forward to your next stories =)
UlTiMaTe KaI LuVa 2009-03-09 . chapter 8
i'm confused >< i'm not sure if i missed something or if there's something missing, meh. Can't complain though, since Quentin and Elvis got together =3
June Apple 2009-03-06 . chapter 8
I like your story, though this chapter somewhat confuses me. I'm pretty sure there weren't any mentions of Brett coming to Elvis's house before...? (And I'm also pretty sure that normally there's an 'eight' between 'seven' and 'nine' :D)
Bloodfeeder 2009-03-05 . chapter 8
Great story, but i think that you might've skipped a chapter in between this one and last one!! I don't know what happened in the past week...
lol or my compy going insane.
Lee
madamadadanechibisuke 2009-03-05 . chapter 8
I like Sam.
ITS OVER?!?!
Back of Beyond 2009-03-05 . chapter 8
Great story, I enjoyed reading it. :) Shame it's over so soon though!
Dakky Duck 2009-02-26 . chapter 7
YAY! An update!

I liked it :]

I wanna know who he chooses too!

I have a feeling it'll be Quentin. >; ]
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