aw~ :)
that was really cute. this isn't a real life story is it?...or is it really? :O

This is a great piece of writing...

One, very minor, mistake that I spotted...

"I remember know in the way we barely touched when you hugged me that something was wrong."

Should be 'I remember knowING in the way...'

Other than that, I really like this...

Spawny

A part of me has to wonder what personal thoughts, experiences, and pieces of yourself are molded in here. It could many, none, a quantity in between - but the speculation stops there.

For that curiosity and question, well done. That is a compliment to the character you've drawn for yourself as a writer - I believe that you try to pull truth into the stories you tell.

On the last three lines: The meaning stands, but there's an aftertaste of immaturity. If that is your intent, then the purpose serves itself with the complexity that comes from being on the cusp of maturation [both in age and feeling]. If that is not as right as you would like, then I find those lines somewhat disorienting from the rest of the piece.